Wednesday, January 7, 2009

A Cupid And A Man Comments

Rating: 4.6

i always work to pay the loan
you only see me running or on the phone
i work all the time even at dawn
i have my money so I`m not alone
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Tareq Jalabi
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Saadat Tahir 07 September 2011

nice quartets interesting read :)

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Marcella D 28 February 2010

sounds so harsh, but strong of you 2 say that. it's better 2 be with the one you love.

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Julie Nixon 15 September 2009

I like the feeling in this poem - its hitting. I have put up another few of my poems. Please read & pass your comments!

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Surya . 27 August 2009

a beautiful imagery and beautiful poem.thanx for invitation voted10 surya

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Marieta Maglas 27 May 2009

''you made us sad and moved emotions inus so, by the power given to me by Venus i throw the arrow of mercy at your heart so living life you shall start '' a nice poem 10++

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you are full of meanings and thoughts..outstanding piece..well done!

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Ana Guerrero 13 March 2009

Wow I really love this one

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Brenda Arroyo 13 January 2009

I believe you... Everybody needs cupid: ]

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O Anna Niemus 12 January 2009

If the poem is autobiographical may God give you more free time to relax and do the work of your heart Thank you for rhyming stupid and Cupid!

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Melvina Germain 12 January 2009

Aln excellent write, I must say I thoroughly enjoyed the read, but I would like to read it again and again, thankyou.

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Sierra Case 11 January 2009

i like it alot it explains how alot of people feel and no one says it for real

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Little Morning Star 11 January 2009

I was startled when I read this poem and I am also speechless.. nice poem, ,

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very nice wow good thoughts a lot of effort was put into this one.. I like how you matched the title so well with the poem too that is important to me.. great piece Krista

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Brianna Trombley 09 January 2009

great job, very insightful, many people are so hard at work they forget to stop and let love have a chance.. very nicely written

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Interesting poem, but I think you must wash yourself more frequently not only when you stink!

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Aisha Love 08 January 2009

i love this poem it was great and something a lot of people can relate to. great job.

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Meena Iyer 08 January 2009

nice and very simple

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Linda Izundu 08 January 2009

funny sometimes sad sometimes i like it

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Miral El Nahry 08 January 2009

its a great poem..You get a 10..

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Now this is a good philosophy. Very good writing....Karin Anderson

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