i always work to pay the loan
you only see me running or on the phone
i work all the time even at dawn
i have my money so I`m not alone
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sounds so harsh, but strong of you 2 say that. it's better 2 be with the one you love.
I like the feeling in this poem - its hitting. I have put up another few of my poems. Please read & pass your comments!
a beautiful imagery and beautiful poem.thanx for invitation voted10 surya
''you made us sad and moved emotions inus so, by the power given to me by Venus i throw the arrow of mercy at your heart so living life you shall start '' a nice poem 10++
you are full of meanings and thoughts..outstanding piece..well done!
If the poem is autobiographical may God give you more free time to relax and do the work of your heart Thank you for rhyming stupid and Cupid!
Aln excellent write, I must say I thoroughly enjoyed the read, but I would like to read it again and again, thankyou.
i like it alot it explains how alot of people feel and no one says it for real
I was startled when I read this poem and I am also speechless.. nice poem, ,
very nice wow good thoughts a lot of effort was put into this one.. I like how you matched the title so well with the poem too that is important to me.. great piece Krista
great job, very insightful, many people are so hard at work they forget to stop and let love have a chance.. very nicely written
Interesting poem, but I think you must wash yourself more frequently not only when you stink!
i love this poem it was great and something a lot of people can relate to. great job.
Now this is a good philosophy. Very good writing....Karin Anderson
nice quartets interesting read :)