A Cup Of Wine Would I Give Thee* Comments

Written so long ago, interesting how my styles themes changed, perhaps I will write again soon, perhaps a few poems in styles I never wrote from among the never written poems.

Romance and love the axis of our beings explained in rapture here++++10 uavanice day regards

a wondrous blessing my friend

My mind swooned in the rapture of this poem... And I'm not joking... Truely Beautiful... Colin J...

The spontaneous lyricism of the lines matches so beautifully with the title and theme of the poem. Thanks for providng the readers such a nice poem to read.

‘on breath of love that endures longer than mere mortal heart.’ ~ Romance in thousand rills…like fairy dreamy…indeed its not ‘marriage is made in haven’ but ‘romance is made in haven’…to go beyond mortality into eternity…will pull up many romancers to a plane where only euphony of ROMANCE will jingle thanks B-2 for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Really great poem! Very profoundly written.

there's this jealousy or anything like that in me that also wants to write the way you wrote the poem especially how you use the words... nice write!

To drink such a wine, to write such lines, must be wonderful?

this poem is so beautiful it makes me feel like a hopeless case as regards writing. john

i just wrote a whole comment and the computer messed it up. it was a poem in it self about a beautiful human being - you! thanks for your earlier encouragement. john

So beautiful and romantic like a classical Greek Myth. The sun, the stars, all nature worships his beloved, bees gather nectar in tribute to his beloved; which is mixed on the wind and Greek gods bring him 'a cup of honeyed wine' that he then drinks to the beloved she in honor of their love. Its a fairy tale romance.