Friday, August 29, 2008

A Cup Of Wine Comments

Rating: 4.5

with a cup of wine
come dine with me,
on thoughts of mine,
...
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shimon weinroth
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Fay Slimm 12 October 2008

A lovely invitation here Shimon, and written with full bubbled alliteration. Well done, and here's to you as you produce more of your good beverages with words. from Fay.

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Yasser Koor 20 September 2008

nice work ya... i like it so much. i read it with the wine more than nine.... nice.

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Greenwolfe 1962 12 September 2008

A lover of wine perhaps. But not a writing to be treasured as readable. One rather to be passed over. GW62

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And I raise my glass in a toast to you.Very elegant and beautiful.A ten poem if I've ever read one.

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James B. Earley 30 August 2008

No question....wine......the nectar of the Gods!

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