Though the happiness were spilling from your deep eyes
But it was arising from the hot steam of tea that you poured.
I could feel the beautiful aroma that touched my heart.
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a divine prayer from Radha I could feel the beautiful aroma that touched my heart. It seemed that you added few dews of love to the tea that gave a touching flavour to it Love to God for better joy to Godly world
Such sweet words Geetha, especially after 4 tspns of sugar. How we would all like to share tea with someone as sweet as you!
Great comparison is drawn between the tea and person who served it. I readily agree with poetess that Just like boiling tea love is always sweet. Amazing write Grade: A ********
Lovely indeed.....drinking tea looking into eyes....as obliviousness in love....led to the sweet debacle. Love this, romance at tea.
'Instead of a spoonful sugar, you just added four spoons'....... I now wonder if it was tea or a concoction of sugar and milk..! Too much of sugar is not healthy...... you know! Really enjoyed this hilarious write!
Looking into each others eyes we drank tea.... Geetha, again a wonderful write!
I loved the hidden meaning in this wonderful exchange of pleasantries with sensual undertones of chemistry mixed in with the sugar and milk. You slowly built up the scene with great delicacy, an amazing piece! !
really love is spilling from your pen thick and fast. beautifully done. liked it.
Geetha- I loved this symbolizing song. Physically no doubt they were making, but the real tea (ie, love) was being brewed between the two loving hearts one was outpouring excess of sugar and the other was pouring milk (ie, diff. love forms) and final tea (ie the saturated love) was enjoyed by both of them... loved it
Love is like a lovely cup of tea. A beautiful poem. Thank you.
When added to a cup of tea a drop of pyar, it tastes sweeter than before.........Geetha.......love carries such a magical spell it can dissolve even sugar into syrup sweetest ever..........a nice sweet poem................ |
the english man loves his tea, My country loves their coffee, anything drank with you is delightful.
A magnificent poem....loved it. Top score.