Sunday, September 7, 2008

A Cup Of Coffee Comments

Rating: 4.5

For my Jeff

A cup of hot coffee
Is like your fiery eyes,
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Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
COMMENTS
Saadat Tahir 06 August 2013

one can almost savor the aroma rising from a still spooling hot mug of fresh brewed coffee lovely words... passionate and romantic, well written liked

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Sandra Fowler 19 October 2009

A warm and charming poem for Jeff. I like your use of simile.10, for you. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Aziz Alkaabi 14 July 2009

This is lovely, Jazlle. And your command of words is simply outstanding.

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Ahhhh, Viva l'amour est beau....Like the metaphoric play....a la cafe & romance... FjR

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Afzal Shauq 24 June 2009

romance inter linking with a cup of coffee is really a good idea and so much inspiring thought..appreciate your brain which think very innovative ideas..like this one and the last stanza is ruchly done in romantic way... liked it A cup of hot coffee Is like your fervid embrace, Soothing as ardent kisses A flare to come to my senses! well done and you desreve to be called here a romantic poet..with innovation..10++++++

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Indira Renganathan 09 June 2009

So inspiring the coffee-lovers

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Kesav Easwaran 20 April 2009

i love this cup of sweet and strong poem coffee...good imagination, Joan...10

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Akram Awadat 12 January 2009

nic words thank you i like it

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Very nicely put... It flows very well.. Interesting too.. great piece Krista

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C.R. Clark 04 January 2009

I really like this poem, Jazlle. I too, love my coffee. I'm sure I drink more than I should. I like the way you use the hot coffee to describe the attributes and the intensity of your relationship. I like your style. You do have a wonderful talent and I look forward to reading some more of your work. Jeff is a lucky guy. Thanks, best wishes Richard

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 30 December 2008

Beautiful and warm like a cup of coffee especially in these winter days. Very romantic as Koyel said.....A very good write.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 September 2008

This is a very nice piece of your works.Yes, you really have what it takes.So, keep on writing. E.K.L.

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Koyel Mitra 15 September 2008

Liked this love poem.Very romantic! A 10.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

'A cup of hot coffee Is like your fervid embrace, Soothing as an ardent kisses A flare to come to my senses! '... Nice, nice, nice.

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