For my Jeff
A cup of hot coffee
Is like your fiery eyes,
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A warm and charming poem for Jeff. I like your use of simile.10, for you. Kind wishes, Sandra
This is lovely, Jazlle. And your command of words is simply outstanding.
Ahhhh, Viva l'amour est beau....Like the metaphoric play....a la cafe & romance... FjR
romance inter linking with a cup of coffee is really a good idea and so much inspiring thought..appreciate your brain which think very innovative ideas..like this one and the last stanza is ruchly done in romantic way... liked it A cup of hot coffee Is like your fervid embrace, Soothing as ardent kisses A flare to come to my senses! well done and you desreve to be called here a romantic poet..with innovation..10++++++
i love this cup of sweet and strong poem coffee...good imagination, Joan...10
Very nicely put... It flows very well.. Interesting too.. great piece Krista
I really like this poem, Jazlle. I too, love my coffee. I'm sure I drink more than I should. I like the way you use the hot coffee to describe the attributes and the intensity of your relationship. I like your style. You do have a wonderful talent and I look forward to reading some more of your work. Jeff is a lucky guy. Thanks, best wishes Richard
Beautiful and warm like a cup of coffee especially in these winter days. Very romantic as Koyel said.....A very good write.
This is a very nice piece of your works.Yes, you really have what it takes.So, keep on writing. E.K.L.
'A cup of hot coffee Is like your fervid embrace, Soothing as an ardent kisses A flare to come to my senses! '... Nice, nice, nice.
one can almost savor the aroma rising from a still spooling hot mug of fresh brewed coffee lovely words... passionate and romantic, well written liked