Saturday, February 2, 2008

A Cup Of Cappuccino Comments

Rating: 4.5

Medium heat showers at six in the morning
Freshen me up with that needed zest
Vitalizing me to face another day
The flow of water sounds like waterfalls
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Anand Madhukar 15 September 2009

A good tribute to the wonders of caffiene.

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Kristina B; Williams 13 August 2009

the title was just so outb there that i had to read it, i gave you a 10+++, just live the best 50 bucks i ever won...check that out, the title is out there but it is a true story...

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Rubab Meraj 12 June 2009

Yum! Your poem sounds delicious. I've read many other poems of yours but I'm in a hurry. My mum's calling me so I quickly commented on one. I'm new on poem hunters but I think that poetry was born in you, you're a natural. I love the use of vocab. i've written only one and you,144! ahh! I'm definitely astonished.please read my poem about anger. P.S: I'm only an innocent eleven year old.

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Naidz Ladia 16 December 2008

BEST AROMA..ths describes most the original and natural cofee.. morning s nice after a cup of cofee, , but how about the lines, WET LOOKED, WOMEN WERE HOOKED...naughty....hehehhehehhe

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Caterpillar MC 22 September 2008

A vivid description of a normal morning...something we would called yet another day, which has been spiced up by the Cup of Cappuccino, makes me want to drink coffee now, :))

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Caterpillar MC 22 September 2008

A vivid description of a normal morning...something we would called yet another day, which has been spiced up by the Cup of Cappuccino, makes me want to drink coffee now, :))

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Chitra - 19 September 2008

your poem is definietley that cup of rejuvenation

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Fred Babbin 16 August 2008

I feel that this is too detailed to be a poem. Nothing is left to the imagination. That is the art of poetry. Also, something that would be a revelation for the reader. No light goes on in my head.

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Leonard Lee 12 August 2008

ahh.. you know.. i can almost taste the cup of cappuccino...

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Rehab Helmy 02 August 2008

a very good one I like Cappuccino :) and yes we need coffee to make our day and give us power to continue our dealings in this busy life! keep writing and good luck

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Sadiqullah Khan 27 May 2008

what a day, , , , poetics are all about seeing unseen things which we feel every day...

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Kefentse Sathekge 26 May 2008

im not a coffee junkie, but i need a shot of a strong one once in the morning. there's nothing like black coffee. i love the way you took my mind on a very narrative journey. very vivid images shoots in my mind with every word i read. addictive.

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Mamta Agarwal 20 May 2008

you have graphically described the morning rituals to prepare for the day ahead. oh yes tea or a cup of cappuccino, the aroma, sipping slowly- just my kind of thing to greet thr day. only i keep the newspaper aside for that time and want to be one with nature. very nice poem yusof.

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Roland Bastien 17 May 2008

It is my routine too. I enjoyed reading your poem. It makes me feel in my mental ease, home.

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James Niles 15 May 2008

Nice and neat, a cup of Java. Is that nearby? Oh, but I take mine strong and black. Milk is for babies and calves, unless you're a goat, a lamb or a colt. I'm gonn'a make some coffee-a bientot.

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Ben Gieske 17 April 2008

I like these lines. What a day to start your motion. My wet look Would make women get hooked

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Ivan Donn Carswell 06 April 2008

One cup and you're hooked they say - no day can begin without it. But we're NOT addicts, merely connesseurs of the need to progress into the World with a poem striding through our veins... Rgds, fellow coffee lover, Ivan

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Cherry Zhai 05 April 2008

Vivid depiction of your bigginning of day, makes me feel positive and heartened. The words are flowing, like the flowing coffee itself. You must be a positive and energetic person.

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Alison Cassidy 25 March 2008

What an ebullient read, Sulaiman. Your description of the first coffee of the day is superb. You sound fresh as a daisy and rearing to face a new day. May you continue to enjoy your coffee. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Nathaniel Booker 23 March 2008

A genuine painting of the routine buildup to that necessary cup in the morning. I live in Baltimore, Maryland (US) and I can totally relate to this gem of a piece. *10*

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