Medium heat showers at six in the morning
Freshen me up with that needed zest
Vitalizing me to face another day
The flow of water sounds like waterfalls
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the title was just so outb there that i had to read it, i gave you a 10+++, just live the best 50 bucks i ever won...check that out, the title is out there but it is a true story...
Yum! Your poem sounds delicious. I've read many other poems of yours but I'm in a hurry. My mum's calling me so I quickly commented on one. I'm new on poem hunters but I think that poetry was born in you, you're a natural. I love the use of vocab. i've written only one and you,144! ahh! I'm definitely astonished.please read my poem about anger. P.S: I'm only an innocent eleven year old.
BEST AROMA..ths describes most the original and natural cofee.. morning s nice after a cup of cofee, , but how about the lines, WET LOOKED, WOMEN WERE HOOKED...naughty....hehehhehehhe
A vivid description of a normal morning...something we would called yet another day, which has been spiced up by the Cup of Cappuccino, makes me want to drink coffee now, :))
A vivid description of a normal morning...something we would called yet another day, which has been spiced up by the Cup of Cappuccino, makes me want to drink coffee now, :))
I feel that this is too detailed to be a poem. Nothing is left to the imagination. That is the art of poetry. Also, something that would be a revelation for the reader. No light goes on in my head.
a very good one I like Cappuccino :) and yes we need coffee to make our day and give us power to continue our dealings in this busy life! keep writing and good luck
what a day, , , , poetics are all about seeing unseen things which we feel every day...
im not a coffee junkie, but i need a shot of a strong one once in the morning. there's nothing like black coffee. i love the way you took my mind on a very narrative journey. very vivid images shoots in my mind with every word i read. addictive.
you have graphically described the morning rituals to prepare for the day ahead. oh yes tea or a cup of cappuccino, the aroma, sipping slowly- just my kind of thing to greet thr day. only i keep the newspaper aside for that time and want to be one with nature. very nice poem yusof.
It is my routine too. I enjoyed reading your poem. It makes me feel in my mental ease, home.
Nice and neat, a cup of Java. Is that nearby? Oh, but I take mine strong and black. Milk is for babies and calves, unless you're a goat, a lamb or a colt. I'm gonn'a make some coffee-a bientot.
I like these lines. What a day to start your motion. My wet look Would make women get hooked
One cup and you're hooked they say - no day can begin without it. But we're NOT addicts, merely connesseurs of the need to progress into the World with a poem striding through our veins... Rgds, fellow coffee lover, Ivan
Vivid depiction of your bigginning of day, makes me feel positive and heartened. The words are flowing, like the flowing coffee itself. You must be a positive and energetic person.
What an ebullient read, Sulaiman. Your description of the first coffee of the day is superb. You sound fresh as a daisy and rearing to face a new day. May you continue to enjoy your coffee. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
A genuine painting of the routine buildup to that necessary cup in the morning. I live in Baltimore, Maryland (US) and I can totally relate to this gem of a piece. *10*
A good tribute to the wonders of caffiene.