Tuesday, December 19, 2006

A Crystal Thread Comments

Rating: 5.0

place a crystal thread
between us now even
for just this moment because
then in some way i'll be connected
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Alexzia Ferdinand
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Stug Jordan 11 April 2007

Good opening poem. It doesn't let you go until the end, and even then it's a bit of a slap in the face, which is great. S x

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Howard Johnson 19 December 2006

Beautiful immagery, With a rewarding ending, Nice write Alexzia! ! 10

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