Your love cries like a river
Drumming into my weak ears
My heartbeat jumps fast
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Faster and faster Drawing me closer to your echo Stealing my heart away- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -very adept additions to the river metaphor.... excellent addition to your poems with Love in their titles
Thanks Susan for your valuable contribution to this poem. I appreciate!