Saturday, January 21, 2017

A Cryof Love Comments

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Your love cries like a river
Drumming into my weak ears

My heartbeat jumps fast
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SylvaOnyema (SUPER.T) Ubah
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Sylvaonyema Uba 26 February 2017

Thanks Susan for your valuable contribution to this poem. I appreciate!

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Susan Williams 24 February 2017

Faster and faster Drawing me closer to your echo Stealing my heart away- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -very adept additions to the river metaphor.... excellent addition to your poems with Love in their titles

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Sylvaonyema Uba 21 January 2017

The poem talks about falling n love.

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