A Cry To The Sky Comments

oooooou, a poem of longing, envy and the harsh reality of jealous love. Oh how we do make mistakes at times in our lives only to regret them later. Very well expressed, one can feel the resentment build throughout, an excellent write indeed.

in the beginning, i thought it could be the 'other girl'...but how sweetly wrong i was! a well worded poem ejecting a surprise out in those superbly wrote last lines...an obsession unmanly for a married male...ten for you Njiri...