Monday, November 24, 2008

A Cry To The Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your scent follows me menacingly
Giving me that feeling so tingly
Slowly you kill me with that smile
Like a venom so strong and vile
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njiri wambui
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Melvina Germain 02 February 2009

oooooou, a poem of longing, envy and the harsh reality of jealous love. Oh how we do make mistakes at times in our lives only to regret them later. Very well expressed, one can feel the resentment build throughout, an excellent write indeed.

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Kesav Easwaran 01 December 2008

in the beginning, i thought it could be the 'other girl'...but how sweetly wrong i was! a well worded poem ejecting a surprise out in those superbly wrote last lines...an obsession unmanly for a married male...ten for you Njiri...

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