Tuesday, May 16, 2006

A Cry To Exist Comments

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Hello again, I’m hear once more, not to fill your heads with rhymes but my feelings in store, feelings of a close friend, someone I adore. Please do me this favor, judge not too harshly, for the person I speak off is to my heart so dearly


She has no joy, yet she cries not
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Phantom Anonymous
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Interesting poem that works on several levels. I felt concern and and caring for the subject of this poem.

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Ronald Stroman 25 May 2006

criticism even from one's enemy, for me... i welcome like a friend, especially when i visit their home, and i invite it... and i'm honest.

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Evil Mandy 19 May 2006

wow! ! eventhough it rhyms too much! ! this writting shows how much you adore this person truly... how much strong and appreciative this person is! ! well your writting is wonderful! you express very wonderfully... good luck! ! love, karen!

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