A Cry Out Comments

A poignant write up of loss of love, an irreparable loss, which oozes through those line. excellant

Very good! I can realte to this as so many others can too. Im pretty sure you'll make it the next time. Good, down to earth write.

This is a very good write... Yet so true... Sometimes in life when our heart takes lead it can be devastaing in the end....

Yet agen fantastic I felt that way a few times myself.. I felt this to the soul so it has to have a 10 or 12

I love it. It's so true and thats why some people don't fall to fast but time heals all wounds, even though it leaves scars. p.s. Thank you for commenting on my poem. I never knew a poet so famous would actually write on one of mine. Thanks again

It touched my heart. You are a deep and loving soul.

What else can be more effective and expressive than this? A painful heart has delineated its sorrow in a very rapturous style. You are really flying in your emotions. What a poem! A marvellous write.

Awww that is so touching. what a beautiful expression of pain and hope. i loved it. Great idea, very emotionally wrenching. Loved it.10 ++++

true... how can you indeed live if your heart was broken so many times? This poem makes me think and wonder how indeed...

your really talented

Here I am, trying in vain To hold a love that is gone… Oh! Heart of mine! Will you survive next time? , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , forget not the true lov no use shedding the tears for gone love...if ucry then it will bring shame to her and to you... hold it for ever....beautiful poem and i liked it most..........10 read mine.............cry not............... anywhere..no separate ways

wow so touching...i loved it...the heart crys and bleed just like we all do so i dont know why people arent gentle with it when we put it in there care...i give it a 10 ='']

a truly touching poem...love when it leaves..takes from you substantially

Heart cries to Love and be Love, your poetry flows and is lovely....10

i like this... full of emotioness.. very nice and make me feel im the cry out there..

As the saying goes, like cats, my friend, the heart has also nine lives. The pieces will eventually regroup.

The melancholy to read is very nice and Acry out well penned..........

I thought this was good. and well written. keep it up.

Let your spirit rise within(meditation) then give yourself a big hug and say'I love ME''..that will get you through the pain of loneliness..It's an Angel lesson I learned which I share with you because it always helped me.A ten for your sad poem of desolation-the world really is a beautiful place-innerward and in the natural world filled with wonders around us.