Tuesday, December 15, 2015

A Cry For The Saviour Comments

Rating: 4.5

Once upon a time,
Man was an Adam
When the beautifulness was beautifying
The beauty,
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Akinnusi Daniel Oladipo
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Adeline Foster 15 December 2015

Good poem. I wonder if in the fifth verse you were discussing a bailiwich? Meaning protection or fortification maybe. Then read mine - Yes I Know - in case I sound like too heavy a critic. Adeline

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Thank you so much and I appreciate. what I meant is 'useless' or 'profitless'. 'Yes I Know' man is not perfect and we are made to make err. I will also be looking forward to seeing my booboo for better correction(s)

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Akinnusi Daniel Oladipo

Akinnusi Daniel Oladipo

Old Idanre, Ondo State
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