Dont keep me hidden,
in this dark room,
please show me the sun,
so that I can bloom.
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Sylvia...Wow...that is too cool! ! Great minds apparently do think alike! LOL Thanks for telling me about your poem...it was awesome! Dee Daffodil
This is sweet and as I'm a Floral Artist, I love anything to do with plants and flowers. Lovely write. Love Ernestine XXX
.. Ah! Once again, your PEN merits applause! This intial somber plea... 'Don't keep me hidden in this dark room..' grabs the reader's attention and the Waterfall GUSH of Pure Poetry, holds them spellbound, till the last word of the final line. Keenly descriptive, as is ALL of your work! A true Fan! Deanna ..
quite in the same vein as the flag i wrote today. lovely, sylvia very sensitive wirte.
You say in your biography you previously gave up writing. Don't! - this is something to which so many can relate, and delightfully, tragically and pleadingly expressed.
Loved the security aspect and then the need to bloom.Excellently put.Your A Star.Love Duncan
Really enjoyed this one, I like anything to do with nature and this had a nice slant to it, keep up the good work: -)
Very nice Sylvia! This is the best part of springtime.....I don't have any daffodils but I do have a few tulips that come up each spring. Every year I tell myself I'm going to plant daffodils cause I'm always so envious when everyone else has flowers up but us! Lovely poem. Sincerely, mary
a good example of integrating human & plant's feeling in one stream....