A Cry For Help Comments

As always, a great poem

if i didn't know you as I do... I would cry for you, with you... but I know the Dark Poetress's muse, and She is Death. Great Write Silentpoet Grl! I'm a Fan! -Kelly.

Dear sis, I don't know how much i love this poem.....your pain full feelings are expressed here.. i don't want to be lost and so alone.........cute line.... God is great...he will definitely help you |

Reminds me of this one guy i dig hanging on a cross asking why hes been forsaken good poem lady

We are not alone in this univers. We are the most important creatures in this world. There is always someone taking care of you, listening to you, understanding you...But HIS ways are not our ways. His time is not our time. He will never leave thee, nor forsake thee. Keep on seaching, cause you'll find, keep hoping.... Please keep alive with your poetry. Your works are amazing.

nice writting... have often asked myself the same questions... check put my poems there are a couple i think u would like

I love your last two lines. I ofter asked myself the same questions and I think maybe we're meant to endure the pain.

Great piece, yet so sad..some things are just beyond our control, but within God's control...He brought you this far, not to leave you here...have faith!

You truely have a poets soul

I've always liked these passages; God grant me the serenity to change the things I can, to except the things I can not change, and the wisdom to know the difference. and Phil 4: 7 And peace of God, which transcends all understanding, will guard your hearts and minds in Christ Jesus. I can feel your longing in this great piece you wrote. Keep seeking and you will find. Sincerely, Kara

i really dont know what to say but this is a pretty good poem: +) .. and God does hear your cry he hears every one cry u have to pray and ask God to help u like people always say let go let God: +) u just have to trust God in what he do and in what he have planned in your life ~hope: +)

..that was a great write.. :)

Yhu r pretty worth saving.... Glad i read yhur poem., its awesome

i think this is my favorite and thanks for the comment

God is always here for you! Dont give up, just keep believeing Im sure He is right there now! great write! ! i can relate to it i too had doubts of my beliefs until i relized that He's always been there, just i didnt want Him around then I felt alone and cried out for Him again You need to know 2 things He is always there for you and He loves you ~Bella

He is just a touch away as long as there is a spark of faith in your heart. kudos to you!

God is still there and i thought to share a thought or two Coincidence Part - I My God he shines down on me With his heavenly love he saved me Once or twice I’m sure When I was feeling very insecure My life had roadblocks everywhere It was then he showed me of his care He found time to come to me They say coincidence is just that But my God has never left me flat This coincidence thing has an odd ring For no were in his book divine Casts light on this 11 letter word I rhyme Nick Krakana

Very good poem. Emotional and breathtaking. I know what its like to hurt so bad and to feel not worth saving, but its not true we are worth saving. Just remember that.

Very hard hitting. Well written

Dear Silentpoet, You wrote 'i can only think maybe i am not worth saving...' and I assure you from The Word of God, that not one of us is worthy to be saved and enter Heaven, but, everyone of us is worth saving, as we are all created in the image of God. You mention in your poem that you are young, and that is what Christ mentions about faith, that we must come o Him in childlike faith, Silentpoet, Christ loves you, He died for you and stands at your door of your heart knocking to offer you Eternal Salvation, if you would only believe. Christ said whoever believes in Him has Eternal Life. In Christ's Love, Bob Gotti