Tuesday, January 15, 2008

A Cry Comments

Rating: 4.5

Help me please I need it I am hurting quite a bit.
My broken heart is crying my wounded soul is dieing.
Razor blade it chases me, it will not let me be.
He tells me I’m not worth a thing with an evil ring.
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i was caught by this poem... what a sad fate for her... we don't deserve to be abused by anybody... i wonder how did u manage to express this poem very well..lovely

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Reetessh Sabrr 23 September 2008

GRUESOME IT IS..how did u manage 2 write such a intense poetry? i donno if i undestood the right msg..is it about aborting the girl child or genral concern about so muchh other.

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Richard Howardson 12 June 2008

tell me if i can help u in any way.

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Richard Howardson 12 June 2008

so cruel such a person must be! i can clearly feel the pain with ur words and wish u'll not suffer anymore, be happy always. u have put ur feelings in words very nicely!

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Neojuna Riddick 25 January 2008

a person like that will live a sick, horrid life. and u my dear will write. great poem

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Tess Rockenstire 24 January 2008

I am angry about physical or other formed of abuse. Good to express them and to let go of the pain and hurt in your words. There's always a clearer sky.

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(red) harley (blue) suici 23 January 2008

very..very..errr the word i'm lookin for is...long lol no no its a good poem love it p.s i will help u The Goth Rocker

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