A Cruel Master Comments

Cruel Mistress I'm SURE! ! ! bri : )

Ah! Since i 'heard' you'd edited this FINALLY, i've decided to FINALLY read it. " Tell Loneliness what it longs to hear (We have lost the one we held most dear) " : ( st.5 ..... you must have forgotten to change 'battle' to 'victory' Yikes! at the ending. but not to MPL this time. but NOT bad. bri :)

I like this one Lora. Sad as love can be at times. The heart searches always.