A Cruel Joke Comments

It is simple and cruel joke We unnecessarily poke Create thick clouds with smoke Keep eyes closed even if awoke if we really poke and unnecesarily fiddle...10

A real masterpiece in terms of the design of the rhymes...

The world needs peace and respite It has attained nothing despite Good efforts for peaceful mission With frank and open admission....yes peace n respite....10

You are very true we are making missiles and bombs to destruct ourselves but we do not think about it unless those missiles and bombs are directly targeted on us otherwise we are silent. It is a sad and miserable situation and we must do something or else there will be no world.

Paper talking but who can walk the talk? Only people with honor, sincerity and love shall divert our wrong path of material world to the right way of humble living. You are very real in this poem cause in this world, power, money and status-quo will speaks therefore everybody running after it and become more selfish.

Excellent poem. 'World can be won over even without battles being fought' so true