Saturday, October 17, 2009

A Cruel Earth Comments

Rating: 4.5

Oh how arrogant the birds are
Boasting their wings that soar across the open sky
Bragging of their freedom with chirping laughter
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Dev Poet 04 November 2009

You have great writing skillz.... Rate you an 8.0! good! ! ! !

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Dylan Oppedahl 03 November 2009

Great poem and you ended perfectly

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Deodath Debideen 18 October 2009

We do envy those who're free. Yet, a battle for freedom should not be feared. The flora and fauna cannot fight and are decimated. Humans can fight....if they discover how!

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Lee Crowell 17 October 2009

congratulations Kayleigh, your writing is maturing, and you have the potential to be a great poet I absolutely love this poem!

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 17 October 2009

nice..wonderful poem. keep it up

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