They chased me and caught me alive after a flip,
They defined me and entitled me though I had never wanted
They then carved a crown out of my own flesh
And gently and precisely put it on my small head made of strange mud
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Very interesting aspect being dealt. My only question: Q. Did they only said Be calm! , be patient! and be smiling! OR Be calm! , be patient! and be smiling... with NO ACTION? ? Only thing what you can do, just nod your head! !
Beautiful poem. Very true said, A crown is thurst upon whether one wanted or not... That too made from own flesh, it has pained none but only self..It pains one who never wanted to follow the rule. Very true said, in society, many things are forced upon. Only those who have guts to rise will surely write on the wall, by breaking all the rules. People will definitely read them. If one hand raises to write, in following years many hands may join too. Let us hope the positivity you conveyed comes to our society too. Loved the way you presented it.
Society and the people around you compel you to be cast in a certain mould. But you resist and refuse to fall in such a trap. You prefer to be yourself, aspiring no glory or the halo of a demi god. But you strongly hope that what you write on the walls will once be read by others....! . In these lines I hear the voice of an iconoclast and a rebel! 'The crown carved out of your flesh' is so suggestive! A great write! A 10
It's about mistaken identity or the fact that they were chasing the wrong vehicle and ended up causing a lot of embarrassment to the man chased and crowned.........Dineshji.......a very creative piece