A Croak In The Dark Comments

YOU and I........Wonderfully written poem, enjoyed it thoroughly....10

but our eyes that shine like diamonds capturing a ray in the dark sheet let us not retreat you and I

Magnanimous write and touch with the pen.Flying colours of poetry.

Excellent write Jasmeen, greatly inspired.

it looks nice to have a reference to some known piece, ... it is a good & inviting poem, though Eliot's YOU & I are heavily interpreted, are yours too are meaning the same? can we interpret them as 2 selves of the same being?

Wholeness of two in love and let whole the other worlds fade great piece of love thanks