* A Critics Chisel And Hammer Comments

chisel does what hammer wants it to do...we write what we think and feel....a piece wholesome for everybody to read...you got it! ! ! ! !

LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Wonderful really...a different poem on an uncommon subject good 10

Lovely and beautiful piece..........nice metaphors used...Thanks! ! !