A Critical Span Comments

Sentiments are expressed with feelings not much with a thought... it has its own way of understanding! Thanks.

Intresting love the wording but not sure about the content

Hey man, the poem is awesome and I love it.Be focused and don't mind what people comment, what you are is in you.

I read someone write that you should be careful with your spelling. Don't mind it. As long as you are understood, this is the most important thing in writing. Grammary, etc...is secondary. I love your styles....This one is simple but full of essences of life...In French we say Merci.(Thank you) .

a well directed satire on some one. good

Short and sweet. Awesome poem

great poem brother, who are you talking about...lol!

you have made the title and theme interesting. i think you are speaking about some girl other than your girl.10

superb style of mocking

Hi, Love has ceartain sprigged virtues in our life.. Stay awake our mind to fight with fate..a good piece of work..I rate u a 10

true, brother, love can bring about a whole change.

Simple, smooth and subtle..yet it's stunning! ! ! ! Good one! ! ! ! Hats off! ! !

love makes you see things you never thought you would. just be careful on your spellings. great thought though