Friday, October 3, 2008

A Cripple Ant Near A Mango Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have heard about the tasty fruit when it ripens
and the legend says lightning won't peep to your premises
if you grow a mango tree in your yard,
But I am very unhappy as I cannot climb on my neighbour's tree.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 06 October 2008

An unusual coupling - the tiny ant and the sensuous mango with its magical properties. Your poem impels the reader to check out the book that inspired it. Another unique poem with a tantalizing fey quality. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 04 October 2008

You seem to have empathy with small helpless creatures. Praise for your sympathetic heart. I have not read this book which seems to have made such a great impression on you. Take care. Always your friend, Sandra

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