might i make mention,
of a looming crimson sky
this moment now fleeting
and will quickly pass you by
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The usage of the word crimson is wonderful, exciting...a poem of good metaphor...thanks
Very vivid use of metaphor. Love lives on in memory. 10 for a fine word painting. As always, Sandra
Memmories are in the Heart, may be sweet or sour, that ever young, a sensitive poem, Thank you author,2009 best whshes to you and family.
Brilliant flow of thought. i also like the phrase you used, 'love doesn't age'. amazing quote. thanks Athena
Lovely flowing poem. Expecially love mention of 'a memory doesn't age' never actually thought of that. Lovely composition. Enjoyed it.
the meaning could seem quite simple at first glance....but you can almost feel the hidden meanings which are as vivid and complex as crimson......excellent write! truly eye catching :)