Friday, January 18, 2019

A Creeper And The House Keeper Comments

Rating: 3.8

Rising and falling, falling and rising,
I always think what the reason of my downfall was.
Who gave me courage to rise after a fall?
Why next time I rose a little higher after all?
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Edward Kofi Louis 26 January 2019

Rising and falling! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 January 2019

What a fantastic write. A great poem that touches on the ups and downs of life, the wheel of life that sometimes depend on our fate and others. This write is also a great tribute to wonderful plants, creepers. It captures their beauty and great attributes. Sometimes their rise and fall depend on human beings and nature. Beautifully crafted and well executed.10++++

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M Asim Nehal 19 January 2019

A poem with philosophical undertone and great metaphor, Life is indeed like a creeper, trying to expand and grow in all areas, sometimes in empty spaces and sometimes encroaching others' space A thought provoking poem with a touch of reality.....Nothing less than 10+++

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Ruta Mohapatra 19 January 2019

So captivating, both the poem and the picture!

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