Friday, July 17, 2015

A Creature In My Eyes Comments

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Who is this creature,
That knows my sun and moon,
This creature that,
I don´t know what to call.
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Vlad Mutuleanu
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Liliana ~el 21 July 2015

I love the reversals in your syntax. Adds depth and increases pondering. I can relate to such an experience - not knowing the relationship you have with someone, cherishing it but also skeptical. So many things in life cannot be defined nor grasped. They are abstract. And that makes them beautiful mysteries. Thank you.

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