Saturday, June 6, 2009

# A ' Creation''s' Song Comments

Rating: 3.5

why search for him
every where
when he is right within me
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Maitreyee Joshi 20 June 2009

the creater and the creation has to be one, otherwise there would be no perfection, and the intricasies of this earth proove this.thanks

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Anthony Williams 17 June 2009

so simple but so deep, it felt at peace when i read your poem and thats always a good poem for me.

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Miriam Maia Padua 15 June 2009

very nice poem...so peaceful... a piece that flows with thoughts of wisdom i love this Sam... touching in a way...we can relate it in our life... God is our creator...we just have to find Him..inside us... in our hearts... 10+++ maia

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Pandian Angelina 15 June 2009

An enlightened soul Who lights our path With his wise thoughts In the form of simple poems For us to learn, imbibe And to follow! Sir, Not Samanyan But, a Sage - I presume! regards, Angel

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rago rago 10 June 2009

a beautiful creation with gift in poetic verse .......

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Lynda Robson 09 June 2009

Very profound write Sam, you put your case very clearly, 10 Lynda xx

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Joseph Poewhit 09 June 2009

True it seems like a universe inside and outside.

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Muhammad Ali 08 June 2009

great piece friend! ! 10..

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'shine your light now. don't you hide it, make sure the whole world see it! ' - Mr Lynx... sir.. nice.

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Bob Blackwell 07 June 2009

Your song should help to get rid of duality and make us realise the unity of everything. A great write. Bob

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 June 2009

This is like searching for ghee when butter is in one's hand. Lord Krishna declares in Bhagwad Gita that He is sitting in the heart of everyone. Instead of searching for the Lord inside our heart, we are searching for Him outside everywhere. This is a subjective matter and cannot be realized objectively. A good subject you have handled nicely.

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Kesav Easwaran 06 June 2009

soul searching...good concept

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Catrina Heart 06 June 2009

A creation's song, a lovely meaningful poem in praise...10+++

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Carol Gall 06 June 2009

the creator is in your heart feel him

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Sandra Martyres 06 June 2009

You are right, the creator lives in his creations...good work 10

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Priyanka Bhowmick 06 June 2009

i am the creator of every creation... well said. wonderful piece 10

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Indira Renganathan 06 June 2009

THE CREATOR WOULD BE IN HIS CREATION ....saintly words SL....congrats

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