Monday, August 19, 2013

A Crazy World Comments

Rating: 4.5

It’s a crazy world we live in,
The darkness,
The cold,
It’s so brutal.
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Dannielle Smedley
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Khairul Ahsan 21 August 2013

Thank you very much for the last two lines. You have narrated the goings on of the world very well. Your thoughts of every one being equal and everyone deserving freedom, peace and happiness is well appreciated. I like the all encompassing theme of the poem. There are differences among us in many ways but at the end of the day we all look for a happy home, a free mind, a family where everybody love each other, and of course, a loving spouse who can be our strength in moments of weakness.

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