Monday, May 30, 2016

A Crazy Old Man Comments

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Gathering the remaining blood of his veins,
In his weak and tired legs who is climbing up?
Disordered breaths tell, 'A crazy old man,
Still in love! He is too optimistic,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 March 2019

A crazy old man, Still in love! He is too optimistic, in an era of energy crisis, no power for the lifts, no gas or gasoline, generators are silent. He is going to see one of his old friends, no one knows where he is........ is he among the missing persons.......... love your thinking my dear Akhtar..........contrasts in this world.........thank u dear poet. tony

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 March 2017

The crazy old man in love still highly spirited in search of the the missing one! Excellent!

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 June 2016

Yes! How long will it go? Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 03 June 2016

Yikes! ! ! This might make me want to stay in bed all day, OR find the nearest bridge to jump off. And, unusually for me, THIS comment is in all seriousness. : ( Bri

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