Something strange is going on
at the age of forty-three:
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Hurry up and arrive and into my car dive the coast we will drive Absolutely ALIVE! I loved it! It may not be all it's cracked up to be, or maybe it is more, let's see!
I love the rhythmic flow of the poem. It is fun to say over and over. Bien!
wonderful. loved it. please read some of my poems and comment. :)
As Noddy Holder once said, Hey mama we're all crazy now. Nice poem Susy.
oh, oh, love this poem...hair blowing free...and your mind!
This is yet another of your poems where it's so easy to imagine being part of the journey you're describing. The great thing is I can read this poem and think I'm by the sea in California in a sports car, without having to pay for a plane ticket or have any fear of crashing my car.