A Cracked Heart Comments

hits the spot.....only those who know this side of emotion can truly feel...brilliantly captured. well done.

what a beautiful way to express untold love. But wonder why? ? ? Anyway, nicely composed, natural flow has decorated the rhythm.10+++++++

So beautifully write... Have deep emotion of love... I giv it +8

Unrequited love is a common theme but you treat rather uniquely with easy verse. good write

i know the feeling, its one iv lived with forever, i hate being the outcast, who feels that love is not for u an it hurts alot, great work, has to be a 10

beautiful, loved it.please read some of min have only just started witing.try innocence lost and fidelity pam

wow this was a great piece. i cant wait to read more

A cracked heart will lead you to death. The End!