Tuesday, August 14, 2012

A Crack In Time Comments

Rating: 3.6

Theres a crack in the clock, a crack in time
Crack in my heart and cracks in my mind
Take me back to when it all started
So I can stop being broken hearted.
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DEEP DARK SOUL POET
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Pandemic Diesel 19 July 2018

this incredile work

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Sylvaonyema Uba 13 April 2018

Good use of rhyme scheme aa, bb in: ...time ...mind ...started ...hearted

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Gauri Mishra 08 March 2018

Can we do a collab sometime Gaurim004@gmail.com I used this poem for a theater monologue-gave cr

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Sofía Sofía 09 April 2015

Really good poem

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