Wednesday, January 14, 2009

'A Crack In The Ice' Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's a crack in the ice
On the frozen waters I walk!
Falling threw is not an option
Someone hand me a tube of, ' Ice crack caulk! '
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Linda Winchell
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Chuck Petz 19 January 2009

Another good one! You know thin ice won't harm you it's the freezing water underneath.

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C.R. Clark 14 January 2009

It does sound like you might be walking on thin ice. As a rule, it never, or at least rarely, gets cold enough, long enough where I live for ice to get thick enough to walk on, so, I guess I lack experience. Well penned poem, Linda. Thanks Richard

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Tia Maria 14 January 2009

Oh I feel just like this right now... I love this clever piece - brilliant! 10 to you Linda

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Linda Winchell

Linda Winchell

Chicago Illinois
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