Thursday, January 24, 2008

A Coward's Life Comments

Rating: 3.2

As curtains rise,
Lain paralyzed
He is first apprised
Our star;
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Alto Lee Thomas, Jr.
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Rekha Mandagere 14 July 2011

Great inspiration for life! When we can unfold the mysteries of nature, why should we choose the cowardly life? Great poem. I give 10+ marks

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Original Unknown Girl 07 May 2008

Great pace to this poem, you used the rhyming to good effect. Passionately written too, enjoyed. HG: -) xx

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egg salad 25 January 2008

very good poem you've used some great words

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Alto Lee Thomas, Jr.

Alto Lee Thomas, Jr.

Jacksonville, Florida
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