Thursday, March 1, 2018

A Coward In Love Comments

Rating: 4.0

Boats, shores and all the blue
can't distract me
from the way I feel about you.
As the tide swells, I dwell
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Lily Ives
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Khairul Ahsan 24 September 2020

'because I wasn't prepared darling, to crumble like a brittle seashell in case you said, that your heart was docking at someone else's bay' - a poetic expression of a genuine fear! Well done!

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