Sunday, May 6, 2007

A Coward I Am Not Comments

Rating: 3.0

I know I can’t
make
you stay
but where
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COMMENTS
Kristen Manski 15 May 2017

you are so gifted at poems! I love this one too! This one has really good points! Your other poems have really good points also!

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Ana Monnar 29 July 2007

Great belief in yourself and conviction. Good for you!

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THE FIRST SHRIKE 17 July 2007

So whom will it be be that you chose...Good write

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Faded Hope 07 July 2007

real intense girl, you have no idea i realy like it :)

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Dipy Hermonite 21 June 2007

Good work. Loved it.

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Jae Centorino 17 June 2007

Hey girl...glad you like my poem..i love this one..i have one for you.. keep up the good work! jae

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Caitlin Fillo 02 June 2007

this is a great poem but some of it is from a song or its a coincidence but enyways its good

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Wondering star 26 May 2007

I think you have captured beautifully how we have all felt at some point in our lives; well done!

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Tho Phung 26 May 2007

I started to like your poetry. It's as natural as a waterfall from your heart. I love it. I understand your sorrow since I've experienced something similar. I believe you are a strong person and yes you are not a coward at all. The sky will be clear after the rain, U.U.

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Osceola Waters 17 May 2007

You are no coward, you face each day with a great deal of courage, not cowardice, i bet your a beautiful person were it counts, let it show, let it come out, no more thoughts of death, you are known, give people a chance and your self a chance to find what it is your looking for, listen to advise from your elders and friends, bring your family into your circle and thrive, O-Ho Osceola.

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Barry Van Allen 12 May 2007

U.U., That soul sounds like it is becoming more mature, be careful now ... - - - you might start finding out that life is fun! B.V.A.

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U.U that poem was EXCELLENT! ! ! Ur most deffinently not weak or a coward and if anyone thought u were that poem would have shown them the truth!

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Dee Daffodil 07 May 2007

I can hear your inner strength coming through in this poem U.U! ! Very nicely said. Hugs, Dee

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Changing Sky 07 May 2007

A lovely poem - very raw and beautifully expressed.

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THE FIRST SHRIKE 06 May 2007

Love is only known when it is shared.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 06 May 2007

What a confused state of mind to an unkown lover?

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