I know I can’t
make
you stay
but where
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Hey girl...glad you like my poem..i love this one..i have one for you.. keep up the good work! jae
this is a great poem but some of it is from a song or its a coincidence but enyways its good
I think you have captured beautifully how we have all felt at some point in our lives; well done!
I started to like your poetry. It's as natural as a waterfall from your heart. I love it. I understand your sorrow since I've experienced something similar. I believe you are a strong person and yes you are not a coward at all. The sky will be clear after the rain, U.U.
You are no coward, you face each day with a great deal of courage, not cowardice, i bet your a beautiful person were it counts, let it show, let it come out, no more thoughts of death, you are known, give people a chance and your self a chance to find what it is your looking for, listen to advise from your elders and friends, bring your family into your circle and thrive, O-Ho Osceola.
U.U., That soul sounds like it is becoming more mature, be careful now ... - - - you might start finding out that life is fun! B.V.A.
U.U that poem was EXCELLENT! ! ! Ur most deffinently not weak or a coward and if anyone thought u were that poem would have shown them the truth!
I can hear your inner strength coming through in this poem U.U! ! Very nicely said. Hugs, Dee
you are so gifted at poems! I love this one too! This one has really good points! Your other poems have really good points also!