A Cow Dung Pit In My Village! Comments

I like a very lot your last line: Came out with purity in my thoughts! WOW! That is a positive result, and that makes this poem very uplifting. Another excellent write, dear Geetha, brilliantly worded. Thank you so much for sharing this impressive poem, brilliantly told. A myriad of 10's for the Full Vote.

extraordinary thought and finely connect to cleansing oneself! nice

I will take a deep dive into the river Taking a deep dive Means I will keep my mind pure from all devil thoughts. An interesting poem with a lovely message.

a complex psychological aspect, described with so much humor and vigor

Excellent thought.I liked reading it.

that brought back some nostalgia in the beginning and the message is also very good...

Life of country side, this poem reminds me very well.....Geetha........after all cow dung a sacred thing almost treated in rural areas of our country.............well composed......

your poem is so unique...

the title of the poem does make me shines, even somewhat warm. It should be said that this poem ‘s drawn and conception are quite good, so good rhythm first, but after Fell into the pit of cow dung, the immediately after adverse and reflection, make people feel a little winded, poetic is not enough concisely.

Very good, simple and unique composition. You can become a very good poet with practice. All the best.

a very unique piece of poetry..

I thought you had actually fell in the pit at first! But the message is a good one Geetha. Everything as you say begins with a thought, good thoughts are followed with good actions, but bad ones and the opposite will happen.

What you throw hits you twice. Once when you throw and second when you repent. Nicely said. Thank you.

It can be hard keep purity of thought amidst anger around you. I used to work on a farm with 160 milking cows and I know how you felt.

taking deep dive means keeping mind pure from devil thought, wonderful write, thanks, You are really a true poet.

A great poem/story. A great write.