I was twenty one and she was sixteen,
My fiancée was a beauty that is still unseen,
Every girl is pretty in her lovely teens,
See her images if you have aesthetic screens.
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This is amazing write with sweet reminiscence of courtship and subsequent lovely occurrence in one's life....... very nicely crafted with nice presentation........10/10
Life was nothing but song and dance, I can never forget that courtship and romance Life is still one of song and dance for you, I suppose! You are the same old enthusiastic lover in your late sxties and she, your glamorous girl in her early sixty's! Let the romance continue till eternity! Enjoyed this poem much!
I love this narrative style of write.Your beloved is still a nice source of inspiration.That's why you can express your thought superbly.Kudos!
Life was nothing but song and dance, I can never forget that courtship and romance, If that year from my life I subtract, But why should I it's still intact. beautiful poem....enjoyed reading
A beautiful romantic poem with your love bursting from inspired lines about your beloved so beautifully presented!