Wednesday, December 16, 2009

A Courtesy With A Black Bear Comments

Rating: 5.0

I met a bear on a city roadside accidentally.
'Don't get frightened that I know Men sing well
And I would like to hear a song from your deep voice.'
The bear told in a friendly manner.
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Alison Cassidy 29 December 2009

Your black bear is perhaps a metaphor for the darkness that hides in your heart. And yet, he is not a scary beast, but one who encourages you to sing and lighten your spirit. (a muse perhaps?) Your poems enchant, Nimal. Your images continue to amaze. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 17 December 2009

A fascinating dialogue with a black bear. They are very common to West Virginia. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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Romeo Della Valle 16 December 2009

Great tribute, brother, your intellect is shown in every piece you write, well penned, you got my vote,10+++(I tried to rate this poem several times but it won't go through, something must be wrong with the site) keep it up, brother, Love and Peace, Romeo

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