Saturday, January 3, 2009

A Couple We Are Comments

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Him,
The one that is always strong in front of his readers,
Within his dark poetry,
He is a teddy bear, but all you see is the scalpel inside.
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Mrs. Cynosure
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Connie Leigh Lindsay 22 June 2009

You are going to have to tell me the story behind this one.I really like it though.I love the way you said that you didn't care what anyone else thought, it was just about you and him anyway.

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Lady Grace 01 June 2009

an interesting poem..well, couples have their own way of expressing theirselves..grace

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Marvin Brato 05 May 2009

Amazing write with tinged of humor, thanks!

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C. P. Sharma 25 February 2009

Wonderful poetry. CP

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**Pirate** Love*~Magic~Man 17 January 2009

A couple of fools...lol nice write Crystal made me laugh :)

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Tokyo hotel 03 January 2009

Nice poem, you seem to write alot about him but he never writes anything about you..and his poems are ok but I've read better.. oh well to each his own. good luck with him. Tokyo

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