A Country Wedding Comments
Plantain leaves lie scattered on a corner.
Black ants are having a feast from the remains,
Make a beeline out into the coconut groove.
With a grain of morsel each on their head.
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a beautiful live poetic show of a typical south indian marriage house...very artful write Satheesan, i must say...your imagination catches every thing real there... the lines, 'Back of their blouses smeared with the hair oil, Makes a dark shade, mingling with perspiration...' bring an unending smile into me... bring into mind the images of a good number of such 'backs' i never risk forget in life! poem ten plus grade...
Though all South Indian village marriages look alike I feel marriages in Kerala are very special with those hundreds of Palm trees around, the attire of people, men in white dhotis, and women in pattu saries...Oh...wonderful. Recently I saw a vedeo of Kerala marriage. Your poem has Sir captured every beauty of what I saw awestruck. My kudos to Kerallite culture. thankx. sathya narayana
A passionate look at the past.....the joy of the present, , , , , and.....hope....for the future!
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7/29/2025 12:36:38 AM # 1.0.0
lol! ! ! ! ! ! sir this is the best thing i have read today..........oh my god! ! u literally to me back to a few weddings i had attended when i was small....what observation skills you got....well penned...will be back to read more