Tuesday, April 20, 2010

A Country Path In Late Spring Comments

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The path of mossy ground nestled
In between maternal hedgerows,
That overgrew atop, dimming down
The brilliance of the day.
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Mark R Slaughter
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Lilac Time 27 March 2014

I love the line gave the late spring early summer haze that paints a picture in my mind because this has been happening a lot. Spring is late and when it comes it feels more like summer...I think I know exactly what that haze is that you're talking about. It's just in the air like spring and summer merging together I love it so pretty :)

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Patricia Grantham 22 May 2013

A great write about the wonders of Springtime and nature. A detailed poem about birds, flowers and scents that arouses the senses. Just lovely.

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Sherrie Lowe 01 March 2012

What a lovely poem, beautifully evokative of Spring

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Mark R Slaughter

Mark R Slaughter

Norwich UK
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