You don't have to go to the dale
To find her playing with a butterfly;
She would hide from you
As she is young and shy;
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can't ever forget the country girl she must now be sweet and loving AKP REMEBER ME PPME
Marvellous poem. The ‘blithe spirit" that is this village girl…. Top score..and myfav
Beautiful imagery. Easy flow of words. You take the reader to a state of utopia. Nature and emotions combined effortlessly and enchantingly.
Part 2. Such a loveliness in these wanderings by the young maiden watched by a gentle minded poet. Top top marks! ! ! Also favoriting this poem!
And her name was Inspiration. Or perhaps it was her sister Imagination. She definitely belongs to the Family of Creativity. She is certainly a lovely creature, an innocent siren to mankind
your POPULARITYCURVE S VERY INTERESTING DID YOU COMPOSE THIS POEM WHILE reading it or recalling your nights in your mines hoping all were thine
Read this lovely poem again today, and got impressed as before. The poem rhymes well and draws an imagery that is clearly visible to the readers.
The poem is as simple as a happy country girl. The poetic imageries are wonderfully drawn and they appear live, as though!
A thrilling expression has been made on her and love with her along with Nature and nurture. The last stanza is much touching. Beautiful work. Five stars.
NICE POEM Takes the reader to Wordsworthian romantic sensations
An outstanding poem with great imagery of a young maiden in tune with nature, waiting eagerly for her love. I loved the way you have unfolded the poem with the butterflies, trees, flowers, sands and pebbles. I can visualise the singing, dancing and laughing......so beautifully weaved into this poem.....A full score of 10 Tiki ji
She is lost in herself and wanders through Vales, forests, hills and hot desert; Singing, dancing, laughing and murmuring No one knows what is in her heart; - - -beautiful lines remind me Wordsworth's Solitary Reaper!
That is a very inspiring comment sir. I am glad you like the poem. My regards.
A beautiful sensational lyrical poem.....much like a heart touching song.
Thanks for giving your time to my poem. Thanks for comment.Regards.
She may be on the hill, sitting on stone/And staring at the sky in a pensive mood/She has been going there to watch/The flitting clouds since her childhood....fascinating expression with fabulous imagery! My pleasure reading this magnificent piece of poetry time and again!
Great penmanship