Wednesday, August 22, 2007

A Country Drive Comments

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I took a little drive one day
Out in the country where I live
The peace I felt as I drove along
Showed my world had much to give
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Marilyn Lott
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Siddharth Singh 23 November 2009

The engaging beauty of your countryside brought to life by your lovely work. Wish i could travel along in peace there.

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Nikunj Sharma 31 October 2009

Your countryside 's charmingly discreet for the readers at large who live in the jungles of concrete the windmill, the barn and the broken school the paint a picture seren and cool someday I shall drive through it too for the time being your poem shall do.......

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Teresa Dearing 11 September 2009

Lovely, I could almost be in the car with you. I see these sights everytime I go for a drive here in the midwest. I wrote one called the Visit and it has the same flavor as yours. Nice poem, T

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Ernest Lee Clary 13 February 2009

HI MARILYN -THANKS FOR VOTING ON MY POEM, I ALWAYS VOTE ON FOLKS THAT VOTE ON MINE AND I FOUND THIS ONE MUCH TO MY TASTE SINCE I TOO LIVE IN A SMALL TOWN AND SEE THE SAME SCENES AS SOME OF MY OTHER POEMS REFLECT. RESPECTFULLY ERNEST

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Mamta Agarwal 20 January 2009

NICE NOSTALGIC POEM. you have captured the country, old memories and ever changing world in this lovely poem.10 mamta

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 27 May 2008

Hi Marilyn. I must say I prefer a country drive more than a trip to the beach, any day. Good read and another pleasant memory. Loyd

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Malini Kadir 27 March 2008

Across the nations it is nice to see similar thoughts in words spun into poetry...

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Nancy Chambers 02 March 2008

Great poem I loved it

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Washington state USA
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