Sunday, December 10, 2017

A Country Boy To The Core Comments

Rating: 4.6

My husband is a country boy
To the core
When we are in the city
He is going crazy
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Bri Edwards 29 July 2022

I loved your last line. But what's the cracked door all about? I gave four stars. bri ;)

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Nabakishore Dash 12 October 2021

Your husband is a true lover of Nature.Very good.I am a village boy and I appreciate him.But if he marries the moon and stars, u would be disappointed and simultaneously many like me in PH would be utterly diaappointed.please refrain and don't allow.

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Nabakishore Dah 25 September 2021

The last stanza is full of humors.nice craft.

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Anjandev Roy 28 May 2021

Nice representation.....wonderful to read....thank u....

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Dear Rose, i really enjoyed reading this lovely poem of a countryman. There is a lot of humour and the last two lines are brilliant. When he came inside The house, I told him He can now marry The moon and stars above....... :) ....10

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Akhtar Jawad 25 April 2020

A lovely poem, story of a countryman nicely written.

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Anjandev Roy 23 January 2020

An excellent work. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Indira Renganathan 25 August 2019

very very natural expression...this is what happens in real life....beautiful and very much amusing Rose

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Xie vent 30 July 2019

Very nice work. Im very related to this poem. So heart touching. Thank you.

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Shaun Cronick 03 July 2019

A poem that simply flows.Enchanting.

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Mr. Mister 01 May 2019

A fascinating poem. A write with humor. Liked it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2018

It is a gorgeous poem on life and nature duly delineated. I cite........ He always peeks through the window Looking for feathered friends When he hears That chirp and tweet His green eyes become bright And sweet. Thanks for sharing.

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korrine grady 24 April 2018

I like this poem it reminds me of bob alot

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Akhtar Jawad 24 April 2018

One night he stayed outside For the longest time When he came inside The house, I told him He can now marry The moon and stars above. Enjoyed these lovely lines.

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Robert Murray Smith 21 April 2018

A lovely write. Your husband, a lover of nature, has the sensitivity necessary to appreciate what we all should.

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Maverick_24279 09 April 2018

I can relate to your husband being a country boy myself I love spending as much time outdoors as I can...Wonderful and funny poem...10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 March 2018

The last stanza laudably articulates your intense love for your better half! One thing I am sure, you are jealous of him because he is staring at the beauty of moon which is your support next area! Pleasure revisiting the poem! Stay always blessed!

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 February 2018

A country boy! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 February 2018

Glad you liked the poem, Edward.Thank you for the time.

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Kim Barney 24 December 2017

I think your husband and I would get along just fine. I love the country also (including country singers like Garth Brooks and Johnny Cash) . I feed the birds and the squirrels and the chipmunks and have places to go where I watch the deer and the moose. I loved this poem and thought the way you ended it with that last verse was superb.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 December 2017

Thank you Kim for your great comment. Your visit is much appreciated. It is good to know you loved the country.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 December 2017

A fascinating poem! I wonder if it is real or imagination (? ?) …… Whatever may be the case, I enjoyed the poem! ! The fourth stanza impelled me to read it three four times! Appreciated! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 December 2017

Thank you for the visit Dr.Dillip and great comment. Yes, it is real coupled with a tinge of imagination.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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