Friday, October 16, 2020

A Country Boy Comments

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The wind finds me in the valley
Chasing birds flying away to the sky
It lifts tufts of my hair and whistles
As I run after the clouds flying high
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Dr Pintu Mahakul 16 October 2020

Birds feel freedom in sky and wind feels freedom in valley. Your imagination comes in nice tally. Flowers bloom in field in shrubs and tree. Reading your poem we feel so free.

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Varsha M 16 October 2020

boy of ten with heart full of joy Along with the wind I can run for miles...and this is actually life which we as adults goget to live. Thanks for reminding sir.

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