A Cottage By The Sea Comments

Thank you everyone for your lovely comments x

Also, it would be an attractive place for current friends to come visit you!

Having a little place close to the ocean is a dream worth holding onto and a place to reminisce of good times with special people.

I hope your dream will come true one day...

This is my secret dream

A special, dream place! Surely, if you wish it, it will be yours. Marvellous poem Jayne....10

I love the repetition of 'may be'. It creates a catchy rhythm.

I can relate to the feelings. I'd love to have a cottage by the sea. So much peace and serenity flow in these words. Ma

Yes, your dreams are eternally valuable and can't let it go. Beautiful poem, charmingly crafted. In particular, I enjoyed reading the first four lines. Jayne, thank you for sharing.