*a Cottage By The Lake Comments

Beautiful. An outing by nature is so rejuvenating.loved the flow and imagery. Thanks for sharing.

such beautiful imagry well done nice words used and chosen

mystic celebration of the easters i must say with someone cherished in that cottage....a cottage long meant for Adam's apple and Eve's banana....10++

Wish I were in the cottage by the lake.

It's a lovely poem and mind you I'd like to stay in that cottage of yours by the lake. Oh! my pink tongue also would like to take a bite on that variety of foods you presented, pork, strawberries, etc. wow! Good idea, good work!

a truly beautiful poem as are u my friend! ! u are brilliant! !

this sounds like a wonderful place to be....a clever write to make the reader want to share this experience....nice work

A great thing to enjoy...=) excellent imagery.. nicely done.

You have captured that slushy time between winter and spring in this fine poem about taking time off from the rat race. I particularly like your use of the expression 'raked over'. There is something agricultural about it that suits the context of the poem very well. Your lamb curry sounds amazing, too! Great write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Excellent imagery laced lines that paint vividly in ones mind. Lovely work

Memories are made of this. I especially like to think of that hour of soul by the old fireplace. A very warming experience. Your recollections are very vivid. Kind regards, Sandra

A nice vivid image you have put here, nice poetic pictorial of the cottage by the lake. Your ending verses were so fabulous..........loved the whole poem........10

'Lake waters frozen for miles Stood in silence summoning Bold feet to jump in Through a hole in ice..' - wonderful lines. You make the poetry alive in the mind of the reader by your usage words and inspiration creating a perfect imagery.Thanks for sharing, Deva. Best wishes. A.

I felt like I was right there with you taking at all in, last years grass, and a touch of the other seasons, I'm also thinking, Only in Canada You say. beautifully said Deva

Your visuals are very crisp and clear to the point of almost being there.What a great thing to enjoy and write about as well.A fine poem of family, friends and nature as well.

beautiful poem, enjoyed reading it. its a true wonderful description of reality and fantasy together.

A beautiful portarit of a perfect day. Tracy has summed this up perfectly. Lovely.

Such a perfectly quaint and cute homey picture you, ve painted here! Loved it! Great write! God love and bless us all-MJG.

This Poem captures my very heart. Nothing appeals to me more than A cottage by the Lake... Conversing by a firepalce, , , , , How Beautiful A perfect 10 Deva

From the mundane endeavors caging our soul to the spirit of wonderful natue and the prisms of life your lines projected....drawing in this reader to contemplate the imagery and sound...and leave wishing