Monday, August 25, 2008

A Corrupted Society Comments

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It's a cruel world we live in, hypocrisy and deceit,
All that is pure has gone in a swirl of hatred.
The depraved society, in which we are going under with our heads in.
We have never even endeavoured to open our eyes
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Hades Pandemonium
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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

Bravo. Thanks for this nice piece.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 August 2008

Friend, I fully share your views...you told them so well. please read my poems HOPELESS PINES, MAN ON STREET etc. I think we can always share/exchange our views sathya narayana

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Sidi Mahtrow 25 August 2008

So much is wrong today Captured in the words you say, But, there is also a thought to embrace As the daily grist mill we all must face. The sun continues to rise each and every morn And as a new day is born, Such it is that opportunities unfold For those that seek to be bold. Taking advantage of the gaps That are between the traps And walking carefully toward Mental and financial award(s) . How else do you explain The 'new' inventions about which you complain. Turn off your ipod and cell phone Walk, instead of ride if you are prone. Then enjoy the substance of the day That's what makes this a great place in which to stay! s

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