Saturday, December 29, 2012

A Corpse Wish Comments

Rating: 4.1

Real world was distinct, most acted good
I got noticed wherever I looked
In this virtual world, nobody cares
Dead I am now, nothing is shared
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Kishor Pathak
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Jayesh Soni 04 April 2013

too goood. makes you value life more. keep up the good work.

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Payal Parande 31 December 2012

passion, pure and precise..makes a perfect poem...brilliant sir bravo

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Hazel Durham 30 December 2012

A great poem full of passion for living life to the best of your ability, this poem is inspirational! Thanks for sharing!

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Kishor Pathak

Kishor Pathak

Nagpur, Maharashtra, India
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